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pls respond to me with reply’s . this is my first story, i hope forgive me if i did any mistakes. The story itself isn't bad so far, but it is very obvious that English is not your first language. There are a ton of spelling and grammar errors as well as a bunch of sentences that don't really make ...

Tom Jackman hated his young life, feeling it to be extremely unfair. At the stressful and awkward age of 14 he felt like the only boy in his whole entire high school who had never seen a naked chick, and that was not from a lack of trying. Now obviously he wasn't the only young boy luckless with the...

I love how this is such a wildly different and darker tone than what I posted for Vision, and honestly it fits very well. I like the idea that Vision prefers to show hosts what to do, where Desire simply gives them the tools and allows instinct to take over. Also it's perfectly allowed to ask for su...

Running from Arnold Schwarze-Robert was probably a smart choice considering the rings aren't allowed to assist their hosts in combat at all. Statistically speaking, over the last 3,250 years there's a good chance at least one host was lost due to a bad case of "fucked around and found out"...

I swear I was only planning to do a one-off with this, but now my mind went and wrote an entire plot for this story which would take at least 5 more parts. Sigh.... The things I do to myself. I was specifically attempting to take a break from writing. Clearly I have an addiction. I may wait a bit to...

Yay new part!

As word about this event gets out, somewhere in that world there will be a group of women's clothing store CEO's sweating bullets and looking up bankruptcy laws.

I don't usually do any stories with laid back casual public nudity since the shock and adrenaline-spike aspects aren't there. Usually I have people naked in places where naked people aren't normally supposed to be. The taboo factor and excitement element are half the fun. As for audience size, usual...

Glad to see this discussion subject finally in story form. Looking forward to where it goes from here.

Amusing intro and the style of the writing is fun, although whoever the speaker is totally botched Flitsen's backstory about as badly as humanly possible :lol:. Didn't even get his species right for starters, and Flitsen does everything that he does specifically to postpone his fate of going to Hell...

This is definitely getting great. Eventually Tris might figure out that 100% of the offers she's been made all night have been double-crosses, but I get the feeling she hasn't gotten that far yet.