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by Executionus
Wed Mar 23, 2022 5:40 am
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Re: Amy’s Life... Part One (Part Seven B Available Now)

Interesting situation with the language barrier. I've never seen anybody use that before. It should be fun to see how that affects events.
by Executionus
Mon Mar 28, 2022 8:37 am
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Re: What a Time to Recall!

Excellent story so far! I'm so glad to see you active again after all this time, since you're one of the true elites. Your niche has always been barely-covered people walking the tightrope between exposure and coverage and you do it so well. I just have to comment that you shouldn't be insecure rela...
by Executionus
Tue Mar 29, 2022 1:12 am
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Re: The Thirst Games 2 -- Part 18

The fates are aligned because I was actually hoping for the Vb vs HJ battle. To me and maybe this also drips into my actual preferences, VB would prefer HJ out of most of the girls in the line up. Also the dynamic really works between the two. In fact this scene gives me some ideas to incorporate f...
by Executionus
Thu Mar 31, 2022 3:46 am
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Re: Character Descriptions?

On the other hand, I am extremely novice at all of this. I never even took a creative writing class in school and would likely have failed it if I had. I doubt too many people here ever took any creative writing classes. Honestly, my English classes were useless, and in hindsight I find myself appa...
by Executionus
Thu Mar 31, 2022 7:32 pm
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Re: Thornwood

I'm 99% certain that it was never finished and ribeye dropped off the face of the Earth. It's a true tragedy.
by Executionus
Thu Mar 31, 2022 9:59 pm
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Re: Thornwood

Do you know when the story was just up and left? I only finished it recently and I will assume the one posted here isn't uploaded by ribeye. Many years ago. It's probably been a full decade by now. It was originally posted on the ASN board, and that whole board hasn't even existed for 2 1/2 years b...
by Executionus
Fri Apr 01, 2022 2:21 am
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The Thirst Games 2 -- Part 19

Part 19: *** Boxer vs Arborist ---- Landscaper & Waitress vs Photographer Part 2*** Two different battles concluded, right next to each other, with only the see-through metal door gate of Foot Locker keeping them apart. Boxer stood over the knocked out Arborist, while Photographer found herself...
by Executionus
Wed Apr 06, 2022 3:06 am
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Complete Story

It was definitely interesting, that's for sure. The way that the "ok" programming glitched when faced with an absurdly not-ok situation was a very unique concept. It was an understated warping, but still clearly the case. I wouldn't call the story all that sexy though, mostly because the d...
by Executionus
Wed Apr 06, 2022 5:30 am
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Complete Story

It was certainly abusive. My only defense is that you inspired me to try to ramp up the tension in the story, and while I was working on that the story sort of took a dark turn. While I'm glad to be an inspiration, darkness is not the same thing as tension (and can often break the tension). My comm...
by Executionus
Wed Apr 06, 2022 10:07 pm
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Complete Story

I want it known that I wouldn't call dominance a "dark" story at all for this community. That's just par for the course. My darkest ENF story on here involved murder, maiming, and being raped by a ghost lol. What made this particular story darker than most was the constant strangling, beat...