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- Fri Feb 05, 2021 4:03 am
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Re: The Exorcism
Great first part! I feel the paragraphs should be broken up a little bit more, but the writing itself is excellent and the strongly-established setting gives the story a great atmosphere. As a longtime fan of Christian mythology I enjoyed Asmodeus and Valac (Also as a minor nit-pick I feel the demon...
- Sat Feb 06, 2021 5:49 am
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The Thirst Games -- (Part 24) -- Voting concluded
*Part 24 [/u] Several minutes ago, Holy Roller was carried away from danger, pleading loudly for somebody to save her friend Virgin from being tortured and violated by the sadistic Bully. She closed her eyes and verbally prayed to God with every ounce of strength that she had, offering up her own f...
- Sun Feb 07, 2021 3:21 am
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Re: Pauls's Pickle - The Poll! Win or Lose?
I definitely vote for him to last, because then the whole dynamic shifts dramatically into a high-tension situation for all five girls as they play Russian Roulette from that point on, constantly "pulling the trigger" nervously-yet-hornily thinking about their uncertain future if the "...
- Sun Feb 07, 2021 10:54 pm
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Re: Pauls's Pickle - The Poll! Win or Lose?
I also had another thought: Once Paul passes the five minute mark, he needs some form of incentive to keep resisting his orgasm as the game goes on, otherwise he'll just pick the girl he wants and go off immediately when its her turn. The best idea that comes to my mind would be for Kerstin (or some...
- Fri Feb 12, 2021 12:41 am
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The Thirst Games -- (Part 26)
*Part 26 [/u] Redneck had reached the point where she accepted that nobody else was coming after her trap. She was beginning to worry about being targeted by an assassination quest for just camping in the woods, and she knew that everyone's locations were going to be revealed on the phones during t...
- Fri Feb 12, 2021 11:03 pm
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Re: The Thirst Games -- (Part 26)
Great job so far. One quick thing, just out of curiosity, how much would you say Slut made in tips throughout the whole thing? You know, I originally meant to make that into a plot point when she got eliminated and then completely forgot about doing it. I imagine that she is the only contestant to ...
- Fri Feb 19, 2021 9:36 pm
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Re: Revenge Contest: The Date, Conclusion
I'd say this qualifies as extreme revenge. I had a feeling Tara was going to seal the deal by sleeping with Jake, just to bring poetic closure to the story. It was all very well done!
- Sun Feb 21, 2021 1:36 am
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Continuing
Alrighty, I took a week off but now I'm ready to continue this. Let's just say that I had a really bad night on the 13th and needed time to recover, but I'm better now and excited about these last 7(8) girls battling it out. Quick recap: [/u] Goth is the only survivor of the gym battle. Gamer is out...
- Sun Feb 21, 2021 1:48 am
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The Thirst Games -- (Part 27)
*Part 27 [/u] *** Bully and Virgin continued*** Virgin sat on her bench, naked and afraid, with only a small towel wrapped around her to hide her body from the cameras. The towel was a surprise gift from Bully to preserve Virgin's modesty, something that didn't seem to make sense from the tyrant. B...
- Mon Feb 22, 2021 1:48 am
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Re: Advice on Writing Stories
I'm 23, I found Dan's board when I was about 12 reading it on my Playstation portable. I know, I know, there's a disclaimer for a reason but who hasn't clicked "yes im 18") This just randomly reminded me about two things from my past that I felt like sharing. The first is that when I was ...