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[dublinjohn]

Please do stripping wars of playville
It's been so long can't wait love your writing
Please your a great writer

You can't let idiots get to you
Plus please finish up private school can't wait for yearbook photos

....... In the case of Playville I've also largely forgotten half of the characters and would need to relearn everything since it's been so long. I probably won't ever return to that series unless there winds up being a pretty large demand for it.

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I'm large and would like to demand it

[Executionus]

I'm large and would like to demand it

I had an idea about Playville and rebooting the series as almost a sitcom type of thing with the main cast as adults (and thought up many plotlines for them). I might do this some day. Lately though I've been demotivated towards story writing and distracted elsewhere by other things.

[TwoWeeksAway]

I really enjoyed your story The Passion of Jessica Christ. One matter to consider, should you ever choose to return to the story, is the distinction between "Lady" and "Dame". A woman who marries a "knight" is referred to as a "lady". Women of independent achievement in the British system are elevated to the title "Dame".

For example,
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Judi_Dench
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Helen_Mirren

I'd also consider altering the name "Joel", though I know why you've used it And perhaps editing out the reference to Johnny Depp, which hasn't aged well. I also seem to recall that Jessica's classmate isn't described before he makes his big appearance in the play.

It's a timeless classic of this genre! Well done!