I'm large and would like to demand itExecutionus wrote: ↑Fri Sep 09, 2022 12:11 am....... In the case of Playville I've also largely forgotten half of the characters and would need to relearn everything since it's been so long. I probably won't ever return to that series unless there winds up being a pretty large demand for it.
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I had an idea about Playville and rebooting the series as almost a sitcom type of thing with the main cast as adults (and thought up many plotlines for them). I might do this some day. Lately though I've been demotivated towards story writing and distracted elsewhere by other things.
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I really enjoyed your story The Passion of Jessica Christ. One matter to consider, should you ever choose to return to the story, is the distinction between "Lady" and "Dame". A woman who marries a "knight" is referred to as a "lady". Women of independent achievement in the British system are elevated to the title "Dame".
For example,
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Judi_Dench
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Helen_Mirren
I'd also consider altering the name "Joel", though I know why you've used it And perhaps editing out the reference to Johnny Depp, which hasn't aged well. I also seem to recall that Jessica's classmate isn't described before he makes his big appearance in the play.
It's a timeless classic of this genre! Well done!
For example,
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Judi_Dench
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Helen_Mirren
I'd also consider altering the name "Joel", though I know why you've used it And perhaps editing out the reference to Johnny Depp, which hasn't aged well. I also seem to recall that Jessica's classmate isn't described before he makes his big appearance in the play.
It's a timeless classic of this genre! Well done!
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