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FYIs from author. Hi, was going to continue to write a bit of an epic here, but I think I need some feedback on whether people like the direction and what I can do better before I commit any more time. If people things it's too slow or something, might edit/re-upload/delete. Been reading stories on...

FYIs from author. Thanks for all the generous feedback last time. I'm afraid I don't think I've actually put any suggestions in yet (except to write what I like :p), maybe in future though. Enjoy, hopefully :). Part 2 - This time shit actually happens Chapter 5 – Not playing by the rules Mona was b...

FYI's: -Decided I will make this thread for the third part, but will put updates in here from now on, so check for new parts if you're interested. -Hopefully this story is going in a direction and style people like, let me know :). -Feel like there's something about the style of my writing that's a ...

==Part 4== Chapter 12 – A sight to behold The air of anticipation as Mona released the clasp. She held the unfastened bra over her bust to wait for a last minute reprieve, none came. She finally let the bra drop into her hand, revealing her perky c cup breasts. The two delightful globes bobbed slig...

Part 5 FYI from author. Thanks for all your nice messages <3! Sorry this part is quite a bit shorter than then others, not sure how the direction is going to be received since we're getting very into kinda thing I like now. Possibly I'm biting of more than I can chew haha. Anyway enjoy. Chapter 15 ...

Part 6 FYI from author Consider a new part to this my christmas gift to you (sorry if you asked for an ipad). I quite like the part personally, tried to pick the pace up a little reckon it'll probably finish around part 10. Let me know what you think <3. Chapter 17 – More dignity is shaved off Mona...

FYIs from the Author: -Thank you very much to Cober for providing ideas/editing/bits of story even for this part, very much appreciated -Sorry if I've taken a while to get this part out, but I thank you for your kind feedback, now on to humiliating Mona some more Part 7 Chapter 20 – Mona gets a new...

Did you ever look into this?

Eventually, I'm lazy until someone gives me a kick, hadn't realised it'd been so long actually.

I'll give it a go tomorrow, will help with my social distancing.

Well, you're a pretty average superhero series, but you're good at pushing me out of my procrastination. I have however split this part a little to help keep me motivated a little. I'm thinking part 10 will be the last. Hope everyone is surviving you know what virus, and probably have plenty of use ...